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X Just Friends X by ~AXISs5:iconAXISs5:



I love you so much,
my friend and once lover.
Oh, how I wish
we could be together!
My heart bleeds to tell you,
my mind screams out: "No!
If you ever did tell her,
then she would GO!
She wouldn't understand!
She couldn't, not ever!"

How could I feel this? Why must I love HER?
We were so happy with how we felt for each-other!

No, that's not true, it was SHE who happy.
Content just being Just Friends with Just Me.
I was in pain, every step of the way,
when she'd come to me,
and then she would say:
"I’ve met a new guy,
come and see, come and see!"
I'd smile, and joke. "I'm happy" I'd play.
"You seem nice, treat her right,
or you'll pay." I would say.

If she's happy, I'm happy,
(for her, can't you see?),
cause I know, deep inside,
she could never love me.
Not for Us, not for We,
it can't ever be.

It's not right, it's not fair.
It's just life, it's just there.
There's no We, There's no Us.
No future, no hope.
No sweet tender moments,
no hurts I can hold.
There's Just Her, And Just Me,
Just Friends. Just Friends.
Forever Just Friends;
Forever The End.
©2008-2009 ~AXISs5
:iconaxiss5:

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Written 10/31/08 12:05AM GMT-7:00 By AXI5

Wasn't sure what poety category to put it in.

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:icongamingguru:
This is pretty good poem there is a lot of feeling in there but It is hard to read the rhyme scheme changes speratucaly, which can be a little confusing. But other than that it is a prety good poem.
:iconaxiss5:
Thank you. This is The Rusty Knight, correct?

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It was not rusty!!!
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Ok, Tin Man. No offence. Actually It was pretty cool.

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:iconamyrose5297:
I'm gonna cry. It just is......right. It just reminds me of him.....

Except for the girl part. He said a girl likes him.

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By this comment, I ment the armor was cool. I realized after re-reading the old comments that it sounded like I was trying to put down your outfit.

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The girl that I'm in love with, I've known her for most my life. However, I can't tell her I love her because there are... circumstances. So, since we’re such good friends now, she keeps telling me about this boyfriend or that boyfriend she has.



Does it hurt as much for you as it does for me?

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Nooo T.T Poor you.

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Chis Chez.

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